Sunday, August 7, 2011

Rap Lyrics #3!, PLEASE COMMENT!!?

It was decent, but i think you're jumping around on topics a little too much. Try to stay on one issue for at least 2 bars and let us digest it before moving to another. Also, it was a little simple, but I like the idea a lot, and i'm diggin that chorus. 7/10

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